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  • Jeg driver fortsatt og søker jobber. Denne gangen som ‘Area Manager’







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    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>




    AREA MANAGER MG2347





    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>





    Wed, May 5, 2010 at 3:48 PM





    To:

    matthewg.83448.776@qwork.aplitrak.com



    Hi,

    I've been working as a shop-manager in a big Norwegian retail-chain, Rimi (owned by ICA), for many years, with good results, and I was the manager for more than twenty employees, in each shop.

    I have a degree in IT, from Oslo University College, (also known as Oslo College of Engineering).
    I have been working in the UK for many years, as self-employed, and on behalf of Microsoft, so I'm also used with working in the UK.

    I attach my CV, and hope to hear back from you about the job!
    Yours sincerely,

    Erik Ribsskog





    CV – Erik Ribsskog.doc
    41K




  • Her kan man se hvordan jobber jeg får tilbud på, gjennom the Ladders, (hvor bare folk som har et inntektspotensiale over £50.000, får være med)







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  • Jeg driver fortsatt å søker jobber, denne gang som Administrator







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    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>





    Thu, Apr 29, 2010 at 9:33 PM





    To:

    claire.ives@premiere-agency.com



    Hi,

    I saw that you are searching for an Administrator.
    I have gone to business Upper Secondary-school, for three years, with good grades.

    I have been working as self-employed, taking business-calls, and am used with using the Microsoft Office-package.
    I've also been working as an executive, as a shop-manager in Norway, and I have a degree in IT, so I guess I'm a bit over-qualified, for this job, but I'm looking for a new entry-level position, in the UK.

    I attach my CV, and hope to hear back from you!
    Yours sincerely,

    Erik Ribsskog







    CV – Erik Ribsskog.doc
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  • Jeg fikk en ny e-post fra the Ladders, (som kun har jobber, med lønn over £50.000), hvor de skriver at jeg har alt som trengs, for å få en toppjobb







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    Erik Ribsskog

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    Thu, Apr 29, 2010 at 9:36 AM





    To:

    "eribsskog@gmail.com" <eribsskog@gmail.com>




    Dear

    Erik,

    Good morning. I wanted to email you because today

    is the 7th and last day to take advantage of

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    with your purchase of a professionally

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  • Ladders sendte en eksempel-CV nå. Ikke dårlig







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    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>





    Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 9:48 AM





    To:

    David Emmerson <DEmmerson@theladders.com>



    Hi,

    ok, I will do that.
    Thank you very much for you help!
    Best regards,
    Erik Ribsskog

    On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 9:23 AM, David Emmerson <DEmmerson@theladders.com> wrote:

    Hi Erik,

    Thanks again for your message. Of course, our premium

    re-write service will always be available to you should you decide to go ahead

    with it at a later date.

    We do have example CVs, and I have attached one to this message

    – we don’t automatically provide them because it is never a good

    idea to create your CV around a template. Our writers never work from templates

    but create each and every CV from scratch. However, it does illustrate several

    of the points I raised in my critique and I hope it helps.

    Please let me now if you have any further questions.

    Kind regards,

    David




    From:

    Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

    Sent: 23 April 2010 17:52

    To: David Emmerson

    Subject: Re: Your CV Critique

    Hi,

    that's very fine.

    Maybe I can get a loan in the bank, or something, we'll see, then I'll

    most probably contact you back.

    If not sure if you want any feedback, regarding this, but if you do, then I

    think it could have been fine, to link to eg. link to examples of CV's which

    are done right.

    Just a thought, in case you want any feedback.

    Regards,

    Erik Ribsskog

    On Fri, Apr 23, 2010 at 3:17 PM, David Emmerson <DEmmerson@theladders.com> wrote:

    Hi Erik,

    Thanks very

    much for your response. I readily appreciate that £299 can seem a lot when

    unemployed. I’m glad to hear you are set on improving the CV yourself,

    since it really doesn’t do you justice in its current state. As I said,

    the CV is too long, and full of autobiographical information that will be of

    little account to recruiters since it doesn’t tell them how your

    experience and skills will deliver the results they need.

    It is

    important to keep in mind the benefits of working with one of our professional

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    However, I

    fully appreciate your immediate your concerns over the immediate outlay.

    Ultimately, the decision rests with you, and I completely respect whatever you

    choose to be best for you and your CV at this time.

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    With kind

    regards,

    David




    From: Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

    Sent: 22 April 2010 23:57

    To: David Emmerson

    Subject: Re: Your CV Critique

    Hi,

    I'm unemployed at

    the moment, unfortunately, so I can't afford to pay as much as £299, for a CV

    now, unfortunately.

    But I'll try to rewrite my CV myself, and then if I get more founds, I can get

    back to you later, to get help with my CV, if that's alright.

    Thank you very much for good feedback!

    Yours sincerely,

    Erik Ribsskog

    On Thu, Apr 22,

    2010 at 4:28 PM, <cvservicesteam@theladders.co.uk> wrote:

    Professional

    CV Critique

    Prepared

    specifically for Erik Ribsskog

    Dear

    Erik,

    My name

    is David Emmerson and I thank you for selecting TheLadders for your CV review.

    I have reviewed your document and prepared some comments that I hope will give

    you some insight. Keep in mind I am reviewing your document as it relates to

    the needs and demands of the executive employment market. We stay in tune with

    what recruiters and hiring managers want and need in a CV and our experience in

    working with executives is unmatched.

    Before I

    begin the critique, I do need to warn you about my style since my comments can

    seem rather direct, though I mean no offence. The reality is that the job

    market is very competitive now – particularly within the current economic

    climate – so I find it beneficial to be upfront rather than subtle or

    agreeable.

    Please go

    through the critique carefully. You will see at the end that I recommend our

    premium CV rewrite for you, which can be purchased using this link (details

    follow after the critique):

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    Let's get

    started! It will help to have a copy of your CV nearby for reference as I make

    comments.

    SUMMARY/INTRODUCTION

    Let's

    start right at the top. First, don't open your CV with tags like

    ‘Personal Profile.' Every recruiter worth his or her salt will know it's your

    profile statement when they read it. Instead, begin your CV with a career title/tagline to announce

    yourself and provide a clear focus for your readers. It will present you in a

    much stronger light.

    Your

    introductory section is too long

    – containing far too much information than is necessary to establish a

    connection with your reader. It gives the impression you are trying to cover

    all the possible bases, making the document hard to read and digest

    quickly. This is perhaps the most important section – employers will often

    make their decision on whether or not to proceed with the CV while reading this

    section. So you must do better! An effective summary is focused on

    prospective employer's needs and outlines how your past can benefit their future.

    It is supposed to provide a quick

    overview and needs to be streamlined to make the most important facts about you

    stand out right away.

    Additionally,

    I recommend pulling some of your higher skills out into a separate Core Competencies subsection underneath

    the summary. This is a great strategy. It serves as a keyword-rich area that

    enables your CV to be quickly found on the internet, while showcasing your

    unique strengths to the reader. Therefore, carefully compile a succinct list of

    industry-specific individual excellences, and add it to your CV.

    CONTENT

    As I

    digest your CV, not much is jumping out to announce it is the CV of a

    high-calibre professional. It is not

    highlighting your experience level or skill-set as well as it could. I can see

    you clearly have the impressive experience and credentials, but you must

    display all you have to offer in a clearer and more accommodating way for your

    reader. This will become clearer as we continue.

    From the

    way your work history is worded, you seem to be more of a ‘doer' than an

    ‘achiever'. Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not result-based, meaning they describe

    what you did, not what you achieved. To be effective and create

    excitement, it needs to be results-based: What was achieved as a result of what you did? Employers are

    looking for quantified results. They want to know you have solved problems

    similar to theirs and that you achieved the results for which they are looking.

    Look at these:

    – I have

    a Norwegian blog, http://www.johncons-mirror.blogspot.com, that I've been

    working on, since I started with it, on my spare-time, in the summer of 2007.

    – Working

    as a freelancer, doing research on Scandinavian companies in the packaging-industry

    for a database, www.packagingdatabase.com,

    on behalf of Packaging Europe, Norwich

    – Chinese

    Food Delivery in Oslo West and Bærum, part-time

    What you

    have here is just job description, and this is going to be very similar to the

    CV content of many other

    qualified candidates. Be proud of your accomplishments

    and allow them to shine through your job descriptions.

    Another

    problem is that your work history

    is not presented properly. The paragraph format or ‘chunks of text' almost assure the

    reader won't read it. Where are your bullet-points? These will allow the

    most important accomplishments to be highlighted. Remember, a CV is read

    differently – the summary is read and then the rest of the document is scanned

    quickly with job titles, bullet statements, and other highlighted material

    being read first. Total reading time is about 45 seconds. If a CV can't be read

    that quickly, it won't be read.

    You have

    also taken your work history too far

    back
    in time by going all the way back to 1979. Employers

    are generally interested only in the past 10-15 years experience because it is

    what is most relevant to the challenges they face today. If you are concerned

    about showing depth, there are ways a professional writer would truncate your

    older experience while still showing you have good background upon which to

    draw.

    Further,

    while a traditional technique, having your referees on the CV is falling from

    favour. Privacy and

    identity theft have become significant issues and it is always best to protect

    the details of your referees. Employers don't need this information at so early

    in the recruitment process and you are putting private information into

    circulation that should not be in the public realm without caution. Provide

    these upon request by the employer.

    MECHANICS

    Moving

    on, the language of

    your CV could use extra attention. At the moment, it does not position you as a

    leader in your area of expertise. The words and adjectives you use are too low-level in tone to successfully

    promote your abilities and place you above the competition.

    Firstly,

    I am sorry to say that I did detect some typing

    errors
    in your CV, such as: ‘90's' – it is incorrect

    to have an apostrophe here. There are also numerous syntax errors where you

    have used commas incorrectly. In most cases, a recruiter will automatically

    discount any CV that is less than flawless, particularly at executive level.

    Attention to detail is paramount, and there really is no room for mistakes.

    There is

    a lower level tone echoing throughout the CV because your writing switches

    between active voice and passive voice

    throughout the document. To be effective, a CV should be written in active voice. Indicators of the

    passive voice are ‘responsibilities included,' ‘responsible for,'

    ‘duties included,' ‘served as' or noun phrases tied with

    prepositions such as ‘quality member of' or ‘representative of.'

    The active voice is more natural, direct, vigorous and emphatic – traits you

    want your CV to have in tone. The use of passive voice weakens your CV. An

    example of this in your CV is: ‘I was also responsible for the job of

    packing the bags of screws'

    Next, I

    must point out that professional CVs are written in a technique called ‘tight writing', or verb phrases, where the

    subject is generally understood rather than voiced. Articles (the, a, an) are

    minimally used in tight writing and only the core message is voiced. You have

    used these articles and some long phrases to describe your roles and

    achievements, and sadly you are disguising the very information an employer

    needs to see! You have to reduce the "clutter" of extra

    words so that your many credentials can be seen more

    clearly. This is just not doing you any justice, and it makes your

    CV appear amateur. Additionally, you use personal pronouns ("I,"

    "me," "my," etc.) which is awkward and incorrect

    syntax.

    Remember

    that communication

    is the number one skill that has the most impact on your promotion, retention

    and performance. However, there is much

    more to a great CV than just cataloguing your career history and getting pretty

    words down on paper. Great communication is knowing what the reader is seeking,

    knowing how to get your message across succinctly, and knowing how to create

    clarity in your message. If you are not communicating well in your CV,

    recruiters will assume you are not a good communicator in person.

    DESIGN

    I think

    the design of your CV could benefit a lot

    from a calculated modification. I mentioned the over-usage of chunks of text earlier which is both

    textually and structurally problematic.

    Within

    your work history, keep in mind that the ideal

    job description
    1) gives a line of job title and company

    description; 2) briefly summarises your duties in paragraph format; and then 3)

    uses bullet-points for your accomplishments and results, so as to maximise

    their impact. Make sure that the bullets are reserved for the most important,

    results-based information only.

    Your CV

    is simply too long

    to be effective. It's as though you couldn't decide what to include, so you

    included everything. As a result, your CV runs at an inappropriate six pages.

    With the use of proper design elements and formatting you can make a succinct

    and commanding two-page CV. You have some difficult decisions and careful

    consideration ahead, but you must remember that a two (or at very most three)

    page CV is the only kind that will be considered.

    On

    another note, the Times New Roman font

    you are using is not the most desirable. When hiring managers are reading

    through dozens of CVs, they will spend more time on one that has an

    ‘easy-to-read' font. We are constantly polling companies for feedback on

    what they want in a CV and believe it or not the font you use is a big deal! The preference of most

    employers is a Sans Serif font such as 'Arial' in size 10.

    Your CV

    overall lacks the polish

    and appearance of an executive CV. Using a run-of-the-mill design in your CV

    hurts your candidacy; you end up fading into the pile of hundreds of others

    instead of standing out. I highly

    recommend a more professional look-and-feel to the document to provide a more

    executive impression. So much can be done with the formatting and design to

    improve first visual impressions while still maintaining a conservative

    appearance.

    OVERALL

    IMPRESSIONS/STRATEGY

    It is clear

    to me that you possess the quality of skills, experience and qualifications

    that are required for a job of an executive calibre. However, your CV does not

    do you justice in reflecting this – it is too long, containing too much

    unnecessary information and not enough important info about he roles you have

    had. It is important to consider today's economic climate. Coming out of a

    recession, job searches are at an all-time high with hundreds of qualified

    applicants per vacancy. With job hunting so maddeningly competitive, you cannot

    allow your CV to be anything less than amazing.

    I

    recommend that you make use of a more executive

    CV, one that demonstrates your accomplishments and skills in a more strategic

    way. Give employers what they want to see, and set yourself apart from the

    hundreds of CVs against which you are competing. Remember that only the best CVs (not candidates) get

    attention, and eventually an interview.

    Of

    course, this does not mean that you are not a good candidate. Rather, the way

    that your CV presents

    your career is not yet very effective or exciting to the reader (who has

    typically read 100+ CVs before getting to yours).

    It may be

    some comfort to know that there are options available in this difficult time.

    TheLadders offers an outstanding Executive

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    , allowing you to relax in the

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    Below, I

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    process, the ROI of working with our writers, and pricing. For any

    further information, please don't hesitate to e-mail me:

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    GETTING

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    There are

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      career books
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    • Master Career Counsellor
    • Licensed Professional Counsellor
    • Certified Personal Brand Strategist
    • Certified Online Identity Strategist
    • Masters of Business Administration
    • Certified Six Sigma Black Belt

    I hope

    that my critique has given food for thought and helpful advice. Please contact

    me on: 0207 148 7154 with any questions or concerns you may have.

    Kind

    regards,

    David

    Emmerson

    Executive CV Analyst

    TheLadders.co.uk

    134-138 Borough High St

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    Fri, Apr 23, 2010 at 5:51 PM





    To:

    David Emmerson <DEmmerson@theladders.com>



    Hi,

    that's very fine.
    Maybe I can get a loan in the bank, or something, we'll see, then I'll most probably contact you back.
    If not sure if you want any feedback, regarding this, but if you do, then I think it could have been fine, to link to eg. link to examples of CV's which are done right.

    Just a thought, in case you want any feedback.
    Regards,
    Erik Ribsskog

    On Fri, Apr 23, 2010 at 3:17 PM, David Emmerson <DEmmerson@theladders.com> wrote:

    Hi Erik,

    Thanks very much for your response. I readily appreciate

    that £299 can seem a lot when unemployed. I’m glad to hear you are set on

    improving the CV yourself, since it really doesn’t do you justice in its

    current state. As I said, the CV is too long, and full of autobiographical information

    that will be of little account to recruiters since it doesn’t tell them

    how your experience and skills will deliver the results they need.

    It is important to keep in mind the benefits of working with

    one of our professional writers. At any level, it can be difficult to write

    effectively about yourself, and this is especially true when writing a senior-to-executive

    level CV, which has to perfectly convey the depth of your experience and also

    compete against many other top-tier candidates.

    With our premium service, rather than improving a document

    yourself that you hope will prove

    good enough to get you an interview, you will be working with a specially-selected

    writer who creates £50k+ CVs for a living and has been doing so for over ten

    years. We can deliver you an outstanding top-tier CV that does full justice to

    your career and skills.

    We have a proven success rate. 77% of members who have their

    CVs rewritten by our writers report immediate contact from recruiters. In this

    respect, the service is an investment that can very quickly pay for itself.

    However, I fully appreciate your immediate your concerns

    over the immediate outlay. Ultimately, the decision rests with you, and I

    completely respect whatever you choose to be best for you and your CV at this

    time.

    Please feel free to contact me on: 0207 148 7154, or at:

    Demmerson@theladders.com with any further questions or concerns that you may

    have.

    With kind regards,

    David




    From:

    Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

    Sent: 22 April 2010 23:57

    To: David Emmerson

    Subject: Re: Your CV Critique

    Hi,

    I'm unemployed at the moment, unfortunately, so I can't afford to pay

    as much as £299, for a CV now, unfortunately.

    But I'll try to rewrite my CV myself, and then if I get more founds, I can get

    back to you later, to get help with my CV, if that's alright.

    Thank you very much for good feedback!

    Yours sincerely,

    Erik Ribsskog

    On Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 4:28 PM, <cvservicesteam@theladders.co.uk>

    wrote:

    Professional

    CV Critique

    Prepared

    specifically for Erik Ribsskog

    Dear

    Erik,

    My name

    is David Emmerson and I thank you for selecting TheLadders for your CV review.

    I have reviewed your document and prepared some comments that I hope will give

    you some insight. Keep in mind I am reviewing your document as it relates to

    the needs and demands of the executive employment market. We stay in tune with

    what recruiters and hiring managers want and need in a CV and our experience in

    working with executives is unmatched.

    Before I

    begin the critique, I do need to warn you about my style since my comments can

    seem rather direct, though I mean no offence. The reality is that the job market

    is very competitive now – particularly within the current economic climate – so

    I find it beneficial to be upfront rather than subtle or agreeable.

    Please go

    through the critique carefully. You will see at the end that I recommend our

    premium CV rewrite for you, which can be purchased using this link (details

    follow after the critique):

    https://www.theladders.co.uk/order-confirmation?billId=20609&sign=y&et_id=84201004&sign=y

    Let's get

    started! It will help to have a copy of your CV nearby for reference as I make

    comments.

    SUMMARY/INTRODUCTION

    Let's

    start right at the top. First, don't open your CV with tags like

    ‘Personal Profile.' Every recruiter worth his or her salt will know it's

    your profile statement when they read it. Instead, begin your CV with a career title/tagline to announce

    yourself and provide a clear focus for your readers. It will present you in a

    much stronger light.

    Your

    introductory section is too long

    – containing far too much information than is necessary to establish a

    connection with your reader. It gives the impression you are trying to cover

    all the possible bases, making the document hard to read and digest quickly. This

    is perhaps the most important section – employers will often make their

    decision on whether or not to proceed with the CV while reading this

    section. So you must do better! An effective summary is focused on

    prospective employer's needs and outlines how your past can benefit their

    future. It is supposed to provide a quick

    overview and needs to be streamlined to make the most important facts about you

    stand out right away.

    Additionally,

    I recommend pulling some of your higher skills out into a separate Core Competencies subsection underneath

    the summary. This is a great strategy. It serves as a keyword-rich area that

    enables your CV to be quickly found on the internet, while showcasing your

    unique strengths to the reader. Therefore, carefully compile a succinct list of

    industry-specific individual excellences, and add it to your CV.

    CONTENT

    As I

    digest your CV, not much is jumping out to announce it is the CV of a

    high-calibre professional. It is not

    highlighting your experience level or skill-set as well as it could. I can see

    you clearly have the impressive experience and credentials, but you must

    display all you have to offer in a clearer and more accommodating way for your

    reader. This will become clearer as we continue.

    From the

    way your work history is worded, you seem to be more of a ‘doer' than an

    ‘achiever'. Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not result-based, meaning they describe

    what you did, not what you achieved. To be effective and create

    excitement, it needs to be results-based: What was achieved as a result of what you did? Employers are

    looking for quantified results. They want to know you have solved problems

    similar to theirs and that you achieved the results for which they are looking.

    Look at these:

    – I have

    a Norwegian blog, http://www.johncons-mirror.blogspot.com, that I've been

    working on, since I started with it, on my spare-time, in the summer of 2007.

    – Working

    as a freelancer, doing research on Scandinavian companies in the

    packaging-industry for a database, www.packagingdatabase.com, on behalf of Packaging Europe, Norwich

    – Chinese

    Food Delivery in Oslo West and Bærum, part-time

    What you

    have here is just job description, and this is going to be very similar to the

    CV content of many other

    qualified candidates. Be proud of your accomplishments

    and allow them to shine through your job descriptions.

    Another

    problem is that your work history

    is not presented properly. The paragraph format or ‘chunks of text' almost assure the

    reader won't read it. Where are your bullet-points? These will allow the

    most important accomplishments to be highlighted. Remember, a CV is read

    differently – the summary is read and then the rest of the document is scanned

    quickly with job titles, bullet statements, and other highlighted material being

    read first. Total reading time is about 45 seconds. If a CV can't be read that

    quickly, it won't be read.

    You have

    also taken your work history too far

    back
    in time by going all the way back to 1979. Employers

    are generally interested only in the past 10-15 years experience because it is

    what is most relevant to the challenges they face today. If you are concerned

    about showing depth, there are ways a professional writer would truncate your

    older experience while still showing you have good background upon which to

    draw.

    Further,

    while a traditional technique, having your referees on the CV is falling from

    favour. Privacy and

    identity theft have become significant issues and it is always best to protect

    the details of your referees. Employers don't need this information at so early

    in the recruitment process and you are putting private information into

    circulation that should not be in the public realm without caution. Provide

    these upon request by the employer.

    MECHANICS

    Moving

    on, the language of

    your CV could use extra attention. At the moment, it does not position you as a

    leader in your area of expertise. The words and adjectives you use are too low-level in tone to successfully

    promote your abilities and place you above the competition.

    Firstly,

    I am sorry to say that I did detect some typing

    errors
    in your CV, such as: ‘90's' – it is incorrect

    to have an apostrophe here. There are also numerous syntax errors where you

    have used commas incorrectly. In most cases, a recruiter will automatically

    discount any CV that is less than flawless, particularly at executive level.

    Attention to detail is paramount, and there really is no room for mistakes.

    There is

    a lower level tone echoing throughout the CV because your writing switches

    between active voice and passive voice

    throughout the document. To be effective, a CV should be written in active voice. Indicators of the

    passive voice are ‘responsibilities included,' ‘responsible for,'

    ‘duties included,' ‘served as' or noun phrases tied with

    prepositions such as ‘quality member of' or ‘representative of.'

    The active voice is more natural, direct, vigorous and emphatic – traits you

    want your CV to have in tone. The use of passive voice weakens your CV. An

    example of this in your CV is: ‘I was also responsible for the job of

    packing the bags of screws'

    Next, I

    must point out that professional CVs are written in a technique called ‘tight writing', or verb phrases, where the

    subject is generally understood rather than voiced. Articles (the, a, an) are

    minimally used in tight writing and only the core message is voiced. You have

    used these articles and some long phrases to describe your roles and

    achievements, and sadly you are disguising the very information an employer

    needs to see! You have to reduce the "clutter" of extra

    words so that your many credentials can be seen more

    clearly. This is just not doing you any justice, and it makes your

    CV appear amateur. Additionally, you use personal pronouns ("I,"

    "me," "my," etc.) which is awkward and incorrect

    syntax.

    Remember

    that communication

    is the number one skill that has the most impact on your promotion, retention

    and performance. However, there is much

    more to a great CV than just cataloguing your career history and getting pretty

    words down on paper. Great communication is knowing what the reader is seeking,

    knowing how to get your message across succinctly, and knowing how to create

    clarity in your message. If you are not communicating well in your CV,

    recruiters will assume you are not a good communicator in person.

    DESIGN

    I think

    the design of your CV could benefit a lot

    from a calculated modification. I mentioned the over-usage of chunks of text earlier which is both

    textually and structurally problematic.

    Within

    your work history, keep in mind that the ideal

    job description
    1) gives a line of job title and company

    description; 2) briefly summarises your duties in paragraph format; and then 3)

    uses bullet-points for your accomplishments and results, so as to maximise

    their impact. Make sure that the bullets are reserved for the most important,

    results-based information only.

    Your CV

    is simply too long

    to be effective. It's as though you couldn't decide what to include, so you

    included everything. As a result, your CV runs at an inappropriate six pages.

    With the use of proper design elements and formatting you can make a succinct

    and commanding two-page CV. You have some difficult decisions and careful

    consideration ahead, but you must remember that a two (or at very most three)

    page CV is the only kind that will be considered.

    On

    another note, the Times New Roman font

    you are using is not the most desirable. When hiring managers are reading

    through dozens of CVs, they will spend more time on one that has an

    ‘easy-to-read' font. We are constantly polling companies for feedback on

    what they want in a CV and believe it or not the font you use is a big deal! The preference of most

    employers is a Sans Serif font such as 'Arial' in size 10.

    Your CV

    overall lacks the polish

    and appearance of an executive CV. Using a run-of-the-mill design in your CV

    hurts your candidacy; you end up fading into the pile of hundreds of others

    instead of standing out. I highly

    recommend a more professional look-and-feel to the document to provide a more

    executive impression. So much can be done with the formatting and design to

    improve first visual impressions while still maintaining a conservative

    appearance.

    OVERALL

    IMPRESSIONS/STRATEGY

    It is

    clear to me that you possess the quality of skills, experience and

    qualifications that are required for a job of an executive calibre. However,

    your CV does not do you justice in reflecting this – it is too long, containing

    too much unnecessary information and not enough important info about he roles

    you have had. It is important to consider today's economic climate. Coming out

    of a recession, job searches are at an all-time high with hundreds of qualified

    applicants per vacancy. With job hunting so maddeningly competitive, you cannot

    allow your CV to be anything less than amazing.

    I

    recommend that you make use of a more executive

    CV, one that demonstrates your accomplishments and skills in a more strategic

    way. Give employers what they want to see, and set yourself apart from the

    hundreds of CVs against which you are competing. Remember that only the best CVs (not candidates) get

    attention, and eventually an interview.

    Of

    course, this does not mean that you are not a good candidate. Rather, the way

    that your CV presents

    your career is not yet very effective or exciting to the reader (who has

    typically read 100+ CVs before getting to yours).

    It may be

    some comfort to know that there are options available in this difficult time.

    TheLadders offers an outstanding Executive

    CV re-writing service
    , allowing you to relax in the

    knowledge that your CV will dynamically and professionally stand out from the

    crowd. We have a group of skilled writers who specialise in executive

    industry-specific CVs. They have extensive experience crafting CVs to best

    showcase the qualifications that employers consistently look for from top-tier

    candidates.

    Below, I

    have listed information that I feel will be of interest to you about our

    process, the ROI of working with our writers, and pricing. For any

    further information, please don't hesitate to e-mail me:

    DEmmerson@theladders.com

    GETTING

    THE INTERVIEW

    There are

    two things to consider here:

    1. You

    are a premium member of TheLadders.co.uk

    because you've got the valuable experience, the superior skills, the unique

    qualifications and, most importantly, the drive to get to that next level.

    2. On

    paper, your wording and presentation are not up to standard. Your CV does not generate enough excitement and professionalism

    for you to be considered a top candidate.

    These

    elements combine to make you a prime candidate for a CV re-write. We are here

    to make your job search easy

    and successful! To this

    end, it is crucial that your document looks as impressive as you do, and that

    you do not lose

    potential interviews in the process.

    Only the best CVS – not candidates – get the

    most attention and eventually an interview. You are clearly a very strong

    candidate but this is simply not enough to get the interview. Do not forget

    that at the application stage, the CV is the only representation of you that

    employers have.

    A lot of

    people, like you, struggle to put themselves down on paper effectively – but

    that's where we come in. We are experts

    at knowing the best way to present you. Most competing professionals employ the

    services of professional CV writers, leaving a disadvantage for those who make

    the attempt alone. It is similar to trying to take on a home improvement

    project: it is simply far too difficult and time-consuming to do on your own.

    OUR

    PROCEDURES (simple but highly effective)

    Our team

    is an elite group of skilled professionals. Each of them is a Certified

    Professional CV Writer (CPRW) with years of experience in effective executive

    CV/cover letter preparation, branding, and career marketing strategies. Each

    has CV expertise in at least one Ladder. We provide customised critiques and

    CVs based on your specific

    professional needs. Our CV-writing team has prepared more than 25,000

    results-oriented executive CVs with an unparalleled level of success. Our

    service, credentials, and experience are unmatched in the industry.

    When you

    decide to take advantage of our CV writing service you can expect the following

    process:

    1. You

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    business hours. The writer will send you a set of worksheets to fill out. These

    usually take 1-3 hours to fill out.

    2. Once

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    3. The

    writer will then produce a first draft within 5-7 business days, and you will

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    TRUST

    IN OUR CREDENTIALS

    You will

    be in excellent hands working directly with our team. This is your chance to

    work with the best executive CV writers in the world, some of whose credentials

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    • Master Career Counsellor
    • Licensed Professional Counsellor
    • Certified Personal Brand Strategist
    • Certified Online Identity Strategist
    • Masters of Business Administration
    • Certified Six Sigma Black Belt

    I hope

    that my critique has given food for thought and helpful advice. Please contact

    me on: 0207 148 7154 with any questions or concerns you may have.

    Kind

    regards,

    David

    Emmerson

    Executive CV Analyst

    TheLadders.co.uk

    134-138 Borough High St

    London SE1 1LB

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    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>





    Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 11:56 PM





    To:

    demmerson@theladders.com



    Hi,

    I'm unemployed at the moment, unfortunately, so I can't afford to pay as much as £299, for a CV now, unfortunately.
    But I'll try to rewrite my CV myself, and then if I get more founds, I can get back to you later, to get help with my CV, if that's alright.

    Thank you very much for good feedback!
    Yours sincerely,
    Erik Ribsskog

    On Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 4:28 PM, <cvservicesteam@theladders.co.uk> wrote:

    Professional CV Critique

    Prepared specifically for Erik Ribsskog

    Dear Erik,

    My name is David Emmerson and I thank you for selecting TheLadders for your CV review. I have reviewed your document and prepared some comments that I hope will give you some insight. Keep in mind I am reviewing your document as it relates to the needs and demands of the executive employment market. We stay in tune with what recruiters and hiring managers want and need in a CV and our experience in working with executives is unmatched.

    Before I begin the critique, I do need to warn you about my style since my comments can seem rather direct, though I mean no offence. The reality is that the job market is very competitive now – particularly within the current economic climate – so I find it beneficial to be upfront rather than subtle or agreeable.

    Please go through the critique carefully. You will see at the end that I recommend our premium CV rewrite for you, which can be purchased using this link (details follow after the critique):

    https://www.theladders.co.uk/order-confirmation?billId=20609&sign=y&et_id=84201004&sign=y

    Let's get started! It will help to have a copy of your CV nearby for reference as I make comments.

    SUMMARY/INTRODUCTION

    Let's start right at the top. First, don't open your CV with tags like ‘Personal Profile.' Every recruiter worth his or her salt will know it's your profile statement when they read it. Instead, begin your CV with a career title/tagline to announce yourself and provide a clear focus for your readers. It will present you in a much stronger light.

    Your introductory section is too long – containing far too much information than is necessary to establish a connection with your reader. It gives the impression you are trying to cover all the possible bases, making the document hard to read and digest quickly. This is perhaps the most important section – employers will often make their decision on whether or not to proceed with the CV while reading this section. So you must do better! An effective summary is focused on prospective employer's needs and outlines how your past can benefit their future. It is supposed to provide a quick overview and needs to be streamlined to make the most important facts about you stand out right away.

    Additionally, I recommend pulling some of your higher skills out into a separate Core Competencies subsection underneath the summary. This is a great strategy. It serves as a keyword-rich area that enables your CV to be quickly found on the internet, while showcasing your unique strengths to the reader. Therefore, carefully compile a succinct list of industry-specific individual excellences, and add it to your CV.

    CONTENT

    As I digest your CV, not much is jumping out to announce it is the CV of a high-calibre professional. It is not highlighting your experience level or skill-set as well as it could. I can see you clearly have the impressive experience and credentials, but you must display all you have to offer in a clearer and more accommodating way for your reader. This will become clearer as we continue.

    From the way your work history is worded, you seem to be more of a ‘doer' than an ‘achiever'. Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not result-based, meaning they describe what you did, not what you achieved. To be effective and create excitement, it needs to be results-based: What was achieved as a result of what you did? Employers are looking for quantified results. They want to know you have solved problems similar to theirs and that you achieved the results for which they are looking. Look at these:

    – I have a Norwegian blog, http://www.johncons-mirror.blogspot.com, that I've been working on, since I started with it, on my spare-time, in the summer of 2007.

    – Working as a freelancer, doing research on Scandinavian companies in the packaging-industry for a database, www.packagingdatabase.com, on behalf of Packaging Europe, Norwich

    – Chinese Food Delivery in Oslo West and Bærum, part-time

    What you have here is just job description, and this is going to be very similar to the CV content of many other qualified candidates. Be proud of your accomplishments and allow them to shine through your job descriptions.

    Another problem is that your work history is not presented properly. The paragraph format or ‘chunks of text' almost assure the reader won't read it. Where are your bullet-points? These will allow the most important accomplishments to be highlighted. Remember, a CV is read differently – the summary is read and then the rest of the document is scanned quickly with job titles, bullet statements, and other highlighted material being read first. Total reading time is about 45 seconds. If a CV can't be read that quickly, it won't be read.

    You have also taken your work history too far back in time by going all the way back to 1979. Employers are generally interested only in the past 10-15 years experience because it is what is most relevant to the challenges they face today. If you are concerned about showing depth, there are ways a professional writer would truncate your older experience while still showing you have good background upon which to draw.

    Further, while a traditional technique, having your referees on the CV is falling from favour. Privacy and identity theft have become significant issues and it is always best to protect the details of your referees. Employers don't need this information at so early in the recruitment process and you are putting private information into circulation that should not be in the public realm without caution. Provide these upon request by the employer.

    MECHANICS

    Moving on, the language of your CV could use extra attention. At the moment, it does not position you as a leader in your area of expertise. The words and adjectives you use are too low-level in tone to successfully promote your abilities and place you above the competition.

    Firstly, I am sorry to say that I did detect some typing errors in your CV, such as: ‘90's' – it is incorrect to have an apostrophe here. There are also numerous syntax errors where you have used commas incorrectly. In most cases, a recruiter will automatically discount any CV that is less than flawless, particularly at executive level. Attention to detail is paramount, and there really is no room for mistakes.

    There is a lower level tone echoing throughout the CV because your writing switches between active voice and passive voice throughout the document. To be effective, a CV should be written in active voice. Indicators of the passive voice are ‘responsibilities included,' ‘responsible for,' ‘duties included,' ‘served as' or noun phrases tied with prepositions such as ‘quality member of' or ‘representative of.' The active voice is more natural, direct, vigorous and emphatic – traits you want your CV to have in tone. The use of passive voice weakens your CV. An example of this in your CV is: ‘I was also responsible for the job of packing the bags of screws'

    Next, I must point out that professional CVs are written in a technique called ‘tight writing', or verb phrases, where the subject is generally understood rather than voiced. Articles (the, a, an) are minimally used in tight writing and only the core message is voiced. You have used these articles and some long phrases to describe your roles and achievements, and sadly you are disguising the very information an employer needs to see! You have to reduce the "clutter" of extra words so that your many credentials can be seen more clearly. This is just not doing you any justice, and it makes your CV appear amateur. Additionally, you use personal pronouns ("I," "me," "my," etc.) which is awkward and incorrect syntax.

    Remember that communication is the number one skill that has the most impact on your promotion, retention and performance. However, there is much more to a great CV than just cataloguing your career history and getting pretty words down on paper. Great communication is knowing what the reader is seeking, knowing how to get your message across succinctly, and knowing how to create clarity in your message. If you are not communicating well in your CV, recruiters will assume you are not a good communicator in person.

    DESIGN

    I think the design of your CV could benefit a lot from a calculated modification. I mentioned the over-usage of chunks of text earlier which is both textually and structurally problematic.

    Within your work history, keep in mind that the ideal job description 1) gives a line of job title and company description; 2) briefly summarises your duties in paragraph format; and then 3) uses bullet-points for your accomplishments and results, so as to maximise their impact. Make sure that the bullets are reserved for the most important, results-based information only.

    Your CV is simply too long to be effective. It's as though you couldn't decide what to include, so you included everything. As a result, your CV runs at an inappropriate six pages. With the use of proper design elements and formatting you can make a succinct and commanding two-page CV. You have some difficult decisions and careful consideration ahead, but you must remember that a two (or at very most three) page CV is the only kind that will be considered.

    On another note, the Times New Roman font you are using is not the most desirable. When hiring managers are reading through dozens of CVs, they will spend more time on one that has an ‘easy-to-read' font. We are constantly polling companies for feedback on what they want in a CV and believe it or not the font you use is a big deal! The preference of most employers is a Sans Serif font such as 'Arial' in size 10.

    Your CV overall lacks the polish and appearance of an executive CV. Using a run-of-the-mill design in your CV hurts your candidacy; you end up fading into the pile of hundreds of others instead of standing out. I highly recommend a more professional look-and-feel to the document to provide a more executive impression. So much can be done with the formatting and design to improve first visual impressions while still maintaining a conservative appearance.

    OVERALL IMPRESSIONS/STRATEGY

    It is clear to me that you possess the quality of skills, experience and qualifications that are required for a job of an executive calibre. However, your CV does not do you justice in reflecting this – it is too long, containing too much unnecessary information and not enough important info about he roles you have had. It is important to consider today's economic climate. Coming out of a recession, job searches are at an all-time high with hundreds of qualified applicants per vacancy. With job hunting so maddeningly competitive, you cannot allow your CV to be anything less than amazing.

    I recommend that you make use of a more executive CV, one that demonstrates your accomplishments and skills in a more strategic way. Give employers what they want to see, and set yourself apart from the hundreds of CVs against which you are competing. Remember that only the best CVs (not candidates) get attention, and eventually an interview.

    Of course, this does not mean that you are not a good candidate. Rather, the way that your CV presents your career is not yet very effective or exciting to the reader (who has typically read 100+ CVs before getting to yours).

    It may be some comfort to know that there are options available in this difficult time. TheLadders offers an outstanding Executive CV re-writing service, allowing you to relax in the knowledge that your CV will dynamically and professionally stand out from the crowd. We have a group of skilled writers who specialise in executive industry-specific CVs. They have extensive experience crafting CVs to best showcase the qualifications that employers consistently look for from top-tier candidates.

    Below, I have listed information that I feel will be of interest to you about our process, the ROI of working with our writers, and pricing. For any further information, please don't hesitate to e-mail me:

    DEmmerson@theladders.com

    GETTING THE INTERVIEW

    There are two things to consider here:

    1. You are a premium member of TheLadders.co.uk because you've got the valuable experience, the superior skills, the unique qualifications and, most importantly, the drive to get to that next level.

    2. On paper, your wording and presentation are not up to standard. Your CV does not generate enough excitement and professionalism for you to be considered a top candidate.

    These elements combine to make you a prime candidate for a CV re-write. We are here to make your job search easy and successful! To this end, it is crucial that your document looks as impressive as you do, and that you do not lose potential interviews in the process.

    Only the best CVS – not candidates – get the most attention and eventually an interview. You are clearly a very strong candidate but this is simply not enough to get the interview. Do not forget that at the application stage, the CV is the only representation of you that employers have.

    A lot of people, like you, struggle to put themselves down on paper effectively – but that's where we come in. We are experts at knowing the best way to present you. Most competing professionals employ the services of professional CV writers, leaving a disadvantage for those who make the attempt alone. It is similar to trying to take on a home improvement project: it is simply far too difficult and time-consuming to do on your own.

    OUR PROCEDURES (simple but highly effective)

    Our team is an elite group of skilled professionals. Each of them is a Certified Professional CV Writer (CPRW) with years of experience in effective executive CV/cover letter preparation, branding, and career marketing strategies. Each has CV expertise in at least one Ladder. We provide customised critiques and CVs based on your specific professional needs. Our CV-writing team has prepared more than 25,000 results-oriented executive CVs with an unparalleled level of success. Our service, credentials, and experience are unmatched in the industry.

    When you decide to take advantage of our CV writing service you can expect the following process:

    1. You will be contacted by a CV writer from TheLadders CV Team within the next 10 business hours. The writer will send you a set of worksheets to fill out. These usually take 1-3 hours to fill out.

    2. Once you have returned the worksheets, the writer will, if needed, schedule a phone call with you to ask for more information.

    3. The writer will then produce a first draft within 5-7 business days, and you will communicate any changes required to the writer.

    4. The writer and you will work together over the email and/or phone until a final draft of documents is produced.

    PRICING AND FREE COVER LETTER OFFER

    The investment to create your CV is £299. Remember, a CV that gets you a position is priceless. If it shortens your job search by one day, or results even in a 1% increase in compensation, it pays for itself. An ineffective CV can cost thousands of pounds in lost time, income, and opportunity.

    Limited-Time Bonus: If you purchase the CV within the next 7 days, we'll write the cover letter for free (worth £70)! This is a limited-time offer so you must click the link to purchase within the allotted 7 day timeframe.

    In order to purchase these services, you must first be signed in to your Ladders account. Click the link below and we will send you the materials to get started.

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  • Jeg er ikke sikker på om den jobben her er noe fin. Så mange skjema. Og man må betale 66 pund, for en slags criminal record check. Hm







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    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>




    FACE TO FACE INTERPRETER – LEP





    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>





    Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 2:37 PM





    To:

    recruitment@language-empire.com



    Hi,

    thank you very much for your e-mail.
    I think it's a bit strange, that I have to pay 66 pounds, for a criminal record check, before I know if I'll get the job.

    Is it ok if I buy this criminal record check, after I get my first pay-check?

    Thank you very much again for your e-mail!
    Yours sincerely,
    Erik Ribsskog

    On Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 1:29 PM, Language Empire Recruitment Dept <recruitment@language-empire.com> wrote:

    Dear Erik

    Re- Face to Face Interpreter Registration

    Thank

    you for your time taken in applying as a Face to Face Interpreter.
    After looking through

    your CV, we can confirm that we have shortlisted your CV to become a Face to

    Face Interpreter.

    We

    urgently require
    Swedish and Danish Interpreters in your area.

    Please

    find attached application documents. Please print out and read the instructions

    carefully.

    By

    law we must hold a completed registration form for every freelancer on our

    database. We are approved members of the Recruitment and Employment

    Confederation (REC). We are also a Data Protection Act registered company. All

    data we hold on you is kept strictly confidential and secure and we are ISO

    27001 certified.

    Please return all completed documents to:

    Face

    to Face Interpreter Recruitment

    Recruitment

    Empire

    Deeplish

    House

    174

    Milkstone Road

    Rochdale

    Lancashire

    OL11

    1NA

    PLEASE DO NOT SEND ORIGINAL DOCUMENTS AS WE WILL NOT BE HELD

    RESPONSIBLE FOR ANY LOSS OF ORIGINAL DOCUMENTS SUCH AS ORIGINAL PASSPORT OR

    DRIVING LICENSE, ORIGINAL CERTIFICATES ETC.

    In order to view the attached documents, please download and

    install Adobe Acrobat Reader from the following link: http://get.adobe.com/uk/reader/

    If

    you would like to register as a Freelance Translator, you must hold

    formal qualifications in translating written documents. Please email

    your CV to translators@language-empire.com

    If

    you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us on 0845 009 7882.

    With

    kind regards

    Face to Face Interpreter Recruitment Department |

    Recruitment Empire Ltd | Deeplish

    House
    | 174 Milkstone Road | Rochdale |

    Lancashire
    | OL11 1NA

    T: 0845 009 7882 | F: 0845

    009 7883
    | E: recruitment@language-empire.co.uk

    |

    www: www.recruitment-empire.co.uk ü

    www.language-empire.co.uk ü

    www.translation-empire.co.uk

    ü Investors

    in People Standard

    ü Customer

    First Standard

    ü Associate

    Member of the Association of Translation Companies

    ü Approved

    Member of the Recruitment and Employment Confederation

    ü ISO9001

    Quality Management System Standard

    ü ISO27001

    Information Security Management Standard

    ü ISO

    27001 – The Standard for Management of Information Security (ISMS)

    ü ISO

    14001 – The International Standard for Environmental Management (EMS)

    ü BS EN

    15038:2006 European standard applying to the quality of translation

    Candidate Experience: Your comments are

    appreciated.

    Recruitment Empire is constantly looking at ways

    to improve its candidate experience.
    Recruitment Empire truly values

    and acts on all candidate feedback. If you have any comments, suggestions or

    feedback, please feel free to contact our Managing Director Yasar Zaman at
    feedback@language-empire.com

    cid:1.2104861190@web28313.mail.ukl.yahoo.com

    Please

    take a moment to consider our planet … we only have one.

    Do you really need to print a copy of this email?

    From: Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

    Sent: 07 April 2010 19:52

    To: recruitment@language-empire.com

    Subject: FACE TO FACE INTERPRETER – LEP

    Hi,

    I read that you are searching for a face to face interpreter.

    I'm a Norwegian native speaker, who has been living in the UK, since 2004, so I

    also speak fluent English.

    I also speak fluent Swedish, (since I'm from the south-east of Norway, close to

    the Swedish border, and used with watching Swedish television etc.), and almost

    fluent Danish, since I had a Danish born grandmoter.

    I've been working on behalf of Microsoft, here in the UK, answering calls in

    Norwegian, Swedish, Danish and English, and I've also got a good result on my

    English-test, when I studied at the University of Sunderland.

    I attach my CV, and hope to hear back from you!

    Yours sincerely,

    Erik Ribsskog






  • Nå er det noen som kanskje vil gi meg jobb her. Det var artig. Vi får se







    Google Mail – FACE TO FACE INTERPRETER – LEP







    Google Mail



    Erik Ribsskog

    <eribsskog@gmail.com>




    FACE TO FACE INTERPRETER – LEP





    Language Empire Recruitment Dept

    <recruitment@language-empire.com>





    Thu, Apr 22, 2010 at 1:29 PM





    Reply-To:

    recruitment@language-empire.com


    To:

    Erik Ribsskog <eribsskog@gmail.com>




    Dear Erik

    Re- Face to Face Interpreter Registration

    Thank

    you for your time taken in applying as a Face to Face Interpreter.
    After looking through

    your CV, we can confirm that we have shortlisted your CV to become a Face to

    Face Interpreter.

    We

    urgently require
    Swedish and Danish Interpreters in your area.

    Please

    find attached application documents. Please print out and read the instructions

    carefully.

    By

    law we must hold a completed registration form for every freelancer on our

    database. We are approved members of the Recruitment and Employment

    Confederation (REC). We are also a Data Protection Act registered company. All

    data we hold on you is kept strictly confidential and secure and we are ISO

    27001 certified.

    Please return all completed documents to:

    Face

    to Face Interpreter Recruitment

    Recruitment

    Empire

    Deeplish

    House

    174

    Milkstone Road

    Rochdale

    Lancashire

    OL11

    1NA

    PLEASE DO NOT SEND ORIGINAL DOCUMENTS AS WE WILL NOT BE HELD

    RESPONSIBLE FOR ANY LOSS OF ORIGINAL DOCUMENTS SUCH AS ORIGINAL PASSPORT OR

    DRIVING LICENSE, ORIGINAL CERTIFICATES ETC.

    In order to view the attached documents, please download and

    install Adobe Acrobat Reader from the following link: http://get.adobe.com/uk/reader/

    If

    you would like to register as a Freelance Translator, you must hold

    formal qualifications in translating written documents. Please email

    your CV to translators@language-empire.com

    If

    you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us on 0845 009 7882.

    With

    kind regards

    Face to Face Interpreter Recruitment Department |

    Recruitment Empire Ltd | Deeplish

    House
    | 174 Milkstone Road | Rochdale |

    Lancashire
    | OL11 1NA

    T: 0845 009 7882 | F: 0845

    009 7883
    | E: recruitment@language-empire.co.uk

    |

    www: www.recruitment-empire.co.uk ü

    www.language-empire.co.uk ü

    www.translation-empire.co.uk

    ü Investors

    in People Standard

    ü Customer

    First Standard

    ü Associate

    Member of the Association of Translation Companies

    ü Approved

    Member of the Recruitment and Employment Confederation

    ü ISO9001

    Quality Management System Standard

    ü ISO27001

    Information Security Management Standard

    ü ISO

    27001 – The Standard for Management of Information Security (ISMS)

    ü ISO

    14001 – The International Standard for Environmental Management (EMS)

    ü BS EN

    15038:2006 European standard applying to the quality of translation

    Candidate Experience: Your comments are

    appreciated.

    Recruitment Empire is constantly looking at ways

    to improve its candidate experience.
    Recruitment Empire truly values

    and acts on all candidate feedback. If you have any comments, suggestions or

    feedback, please feel free to contact our Managing Director Yasar Zaman at
    feedback@language-empire.com

    cid:1.2104861190@web28313.mail.ukl.yahoo.com

    Please

    take a moment to consider our planet … we only have one.

    Do you really need to print a copy of this email?

    From: Erik Ribsskog [mailto:eribsskog@gmail.com]

    Sent: 07 April 2010 19:52

    To: recruitment@language-empire.com

    Subject: FACE TO FACE INTERPRETER – LEP

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    PS.

    Det første dokumentet, var noe om at jeg måtte betale 66 pund.

    Det er ganske mye penger for en som er arbeidsledig.

    At man skal betale penger for å få en jobb, det høres litt rart ut.

    Det her må være noe svindel, tror jeg.

    Her er mer om dette:

    How to Apply for a CRB